Monday 14 September 2009

There's no protract...




It wasn't glitz,showbiz
No firework, erk!
It wasn't infatuation,sedation,
No attraction,fascination.

It was liking, a striking,
Shoulda spoken on time, prime,
Woulda made sense, hence,
Life is good, misunderstood.

There's no backing, tacking,
It's exposed, predisposed,
It ain't supposition, preposition,
But it's needed, gotta be weeded.

How long would it last,ghast,
I gotta move, remove,
Step out, about,
Speak out, shout.

Gotta ask, unmask,
Find, rewind,
Accept, be tacet,
React, there's no protract...




25 comments:

Arjun said...

Thats ryt.....

It wld have made sense if i'd written this one too .. ;)

I liked the second and third paragraph the most.. :)

Cheers..!!
Arjun

peter said...

u are acquiring a nice pattern :)
do i need to mention ..gud one again !

Anurag said...

mere upar se gayaa yeh...Kuch zyada hee 'ing waale words hazam nahin hue...Aage se Krupya shuddh Angrezi mein likhe :D :D ..

Anurag said...

'ion I meant not 'ing :P :P

- Sugar Cube - said...

Cool :) Interesting topic :D

Assman said...

I had no idea you would be good at poetry..

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Arjun
Hehe, great minds think alike... :D

Thank you... :)

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Peter
Coming from the king of it all, it's an honour... thank you... :D *taking a bow*

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Anurag
Abbey gin kar 6 words hain -tion waale... use a dictionary... shoo! :P

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Sugar cube
Erm.. thank you.. :D

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Assman
Ah, it bemuses me so,
To see you come and go... :P

Honestly, your long hiatuses, I keep wondering if you are simply a silent reader, or a non-reader for some time...

About the poem... well how can you have an idea about the existence of something that does not exist... ;) But thank you for the compliment... :D

Thousif Raza said...

hmm good luck with that, hope the 'bug' that has caught you leaves you soon,


take care and keep writing............

akanksha said...

Great!
Life is good, misunderstood!

Awesome dear! Loved this one! Unusual rhyming scheme that i really looooooooooooved!

I am tempted to attempt something like this :)

Too good!

akanksha said...

Great!
Life is good, misunderstood!

Awesome dear! Loved this one! Unusual rhyming scheme that i really looooooooooooved!

I am tempted to attempt something like this :)

Too good!

Assman said...

I am a silent reader.. been reading always.. commenting is strictly seasonal :)

divsi said...

beautiful:)

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Thousif
Thank you... I'll try!!! :D

Akansha Agrawal said...

@akanksha
You can try the rhyme, anytime... :)

Thank you hai ji... :D

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Assman
Oh thank you... :D *feeling honoured*

Akansha Agrawal said...

@divsi
Welcome! and Thank you so much... :D

aZoed said...

I read aaj hi!

Printout time... although I know nothing helps... but I gotta try... LOVELY piece ;)

Akansha Agrawal said...

@aZoed
Connect printer ka USB and press Ctrl+P... Don't lie... read aaj hi... teen din se you were trying to make the head and tail uska.. ab jaakar kuch samjha hai :P

Thank you... :D

workhard said...

Really write well, among the poems i have read..this kinda different.. nice work..

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Mads said...

i loved it...
ur so good at this :-w did u know that?
n....got it why u told me i would like it ;)

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Mads
Erm... no I didn't know till I wrote it... \:D/

>:D< >:D<