Monday 7 September 2009

ME... right now...


OK, I warn you.. this is pure cribbing, please run away if you don't want to read crib!

I am grumpy,
I am moody,
Feeling a nobody,
Warning everybody,
DND anybody...

Feeling low,
Dealing with blow after blow,
Dunno what's the woe!!!
Looking like the Junky Joe,
This is for everybody who wants my status quo!

My head is swimming,
Cauldron of emotions brimming,
Brains gone wandering,
Lights dimming...
The ME... meandering....

I am hurt,
Doesn't raise any red alert,
Makes me inert,
Proves me a subvert,
A pervert!

I need a life,
That doesn't cut like a knife,
Isn't at a strife,
My wounds are rife...
I need a revive...

Utter disgrace,
In nobody's life a place,
A product you easily replace,
Man!!! Gimme some space....
I rest my case.

P.S. :'( :'( :'(
I don't have anything to say... please don't leave crappy comments that don't help!
Cuts like a knife is a Bryan Adams song... Not copying.... it just po(o)pped up!!!




18 comments:

akanksha said...

It was amazingly fast! Loved the flow! :)

Dont know whats the matter, sad poetries everywhere in the blogosphere today :(

Anyways, it shall pass.From your words, it seems it can't get worse...So, it would only get better!

Cheer up!

Akanksha

peter said...

i like it, No i actually loved the way u hv written it ..probably i wud hv written it this way only !.. though mine is never this soft ..but still the style appeals to me :)
nice one !

and more than being a B.A song it's an awesome simile ..so no clarifications needed there :P

Arjun said...

I enjoyed the poem.. The flow was amazing.. \

Hoping that u wld cheer up.. :)

Cheers..!!
Arjun

Akansha Agrawal said...

@akanksha
Thank you... :D

Yeah, I am better... thanks for the visit :) hoping to see my name sharer more often ;)

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Peter
Haan I felt thoda thoda rap at places...

You use stronger words re, more impact waale... :)

Compliment k liye thank you so much... >:D< \:D/

B.A kya hota hai? :-ss

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Arjun
Thank you :D

It does cheer me up so thank you again :D :D :D

Mads said...

B.A. bole to bryan adams re :P :P
i loved the poem. the subvert pervert rhyme was terrific and the whole poem was perfectly in place.

but why oh why...ok i can't leave crappy cheer up comments...so will ask u on gtalk only :D >:D< :* <3 \:D/

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Mads...
Ohhh... *slaps her forehead*

@Peter
Well yeah but I just wasn't in a mood to listen to people complaining that I was stealing copyrighted stuff or whatever... so added it :) ;)

@Mads
Mil toh sahi gtalk par... I am tired of waiting for you to come online now... Ok, ok, I know exams hai... :-ss >:D< :D <3 :*

workhard said...

U know what..that is me.. most of the time..

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Thousif Raza said...

the poem is better than nice, but i am appalled at your situation, really i can only say talk with a close friend or a complete stranger they both help a lot believe me

happens it will become good just let it pass ya

take care and keep writing.........

divsi said...

hope ure ova it..
now is that a crappy comment:)

tc!

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Thousif
I dunno why the phase seems to be an on-off thing in my life... guess we have to find a permanent full wave inverter :D ;)

Akansha Agrawal said...

@divsi
Yeah I was kinda outta it the moment I penned down the entire thing... but unfortunately it keeps returning and that's what bugs me... :( :-s

Akansha Agrawal said...

@workhard
:) Your name is the solution to it... :D

aZoed said...

nice job...

A Pervert! lol

hey! I want the rights to this piece... wanna include it in my next rap album :P

u game?

Akansha Agrawal said...

@aZoed
Rights toh nahi milenge bhai... you took more than a week isko samajhne mein... when you sing people will take a lifetime... baap re... :-s Nah... no rights! :P Meri album niklegi tab I'll put it usme... \:D/

workhard said...

How i only wish i could really do that

Akansha Agrawal said...

@workhard
Yeah, I know... :)