Monday 28 September 2009

Alone in the crowd...


There are times when you watch,
The world just zips by,
You sit with cupped hands,
Feeling wry.

You sit on the ledge,
And watch the people move on,
With you, yet sans you,
And then they're gone...

Everybody's busy,
Just find something to do...
Doing what you should,
It's just you who's blue...

A shoulder to rest upon,
An ear to put sweet-nothings into,
A hand to hold,
Some words to hang on to...

For all this you crave,
But there's no-one,
Nobody out there,
To whom you could run....

P.S. I'm just kinda bored... *sitting with hands cupped*
Thank you Samadrita for the beautiful awards you've bestowed upon me... :) I will pass them on... just not today... :D




33 comments:

Samadrita said...

Hey I can totally relate to your feelings.Happens to me too... I swear by my loneliness sometimes. :P
Sometimes I just love sitting quietly and observing people all around me.It's fascinating.
Anyway be sure to read my new story and lemme know how it was. :D

divsi said...

thats contemplation!!!

n its through these moments of one-ness wid yrself we truly truly discover ourselves!!:))

kip writin,
wishes n smiles:)))

divs

- Sugar Cube - said...

Nice one!
Specially liked the last para

Mads said...

nice one...and no more boredom...i'll be there for u >:D< *sings*

waise..poem writing spree pe hai apni whacky circuit :-w

Mads said...

congrats on the award >:D< u deserve them che :) :* <3

aZoed said...

nice one...
I can kinda relate to this one - "And watch the people move on"

but, ain't really the thing for a rap number :P

YOU ARE DELAYING THE ALBUM! :D

Arjun said...

yeah yeah.. i can picturise it.. :)

Very well written btw.. :) U actually write wonderfully well.. poems.. :)

I'll comment on ur prev post some other time.. :)

Cheers..!!
Arjun

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Samadrita
Yeah, sometimes it can be fascinating... but when therez absolutely nobody around you, I don't mean literally... there tends to be an emptiness... btw I am an observer too :D

Akansha Agrawal said...

@divsi
Yup xactly it is contemplation... :D
:)

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Sugar cube
Thank you... :D
Looks like everybody likes the last 2 para the most... :D

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Mads
Thank you che...
>:D< >:D<

*I'll not sing... only say... I'll be there for you... I'll be there for you....* ;)

Yeah... pata nahi kyun... :-s Aww... thank you... :D \:D/

Akansha Agrawal said...

@aZoed
Thank you hai ji... :D

Nahi ji... my album is already in progress... :P baaki jawaab toh mil hi gaya... :D

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Arjun
Thank you sooo much... \:D/

But... I am not a good poet... I still maintain that... :D

Np... take your time ji... :D

akanksha said...

That was toooooooooo good!!! I must say, U're amazing with poetry!
Loved this one, its my feelings potrayed in your words!

Akansha Agrawal said...

@akanksha
Thank you soooo much.... :D *hugs*

:)

kish said...

good one, well put.

Samadrita said...

Oi you're tagged in my last post.Go check :D

Thousif Raza said...

you write awesome, i guess you already know that :P, but still dont be sad ya,. life goes through a bad patch, but smile girl it will change the way you look at things... :)


take care and keep writing............

Akansha Agrawal said...

@kish
Thank you... :)

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Samadrita
I checked.. cool tags yaar... will take up once I emerge out of my pracs ;)

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Thousif
Thank you :)

Dhanya said...

Congrats on the award :) :D Why so alone? Hum hai na :D >:D<

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Dhanya
Thank you :D

Aap hi nahi the na... isliye toh bore ho raha tha... >:D< >:D<

Chitwan said...

hmmm......so brilliantly penned down.. :)

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Chitwan
Thank you :D

straight from the heart said...

chanced on your blog via aZoed

good post and good blog overall.keep at it

Akansha Agrawal said...

@straight from the heart
Coming straight from you heart... thank you for that :)

Finally, Aseem k blog se koi toh aaya :P

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

Wow..Beautiful use of words and poem is beautifully penned down...Bhavnao ki mala it is :)

Congratulations for the awards :)

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