Saturday, 3 January, 2009

When I look at the rain...-II


[Read here for the first part]

I just found out that he was headed back, back to where I was, waiting for him... He was coming back after yeeears, and I would be meeting him, he'd said he wanted to see me. Oh, gtalk is a boon...

He is coming, coming for me! Oh, I would want to hug him as soon as I see him... 

But what will I say to him? Tell him everything about it? What if there's someone in his life? And most importantly, do I still love him the way I used to? 

God, I need some answers...

[Bashes herself] 
hey! God's not in love, you are... ask yourself gal!!!



18 comments:

Chriz said...

this reminds me of a korean movie i saw recently..

lovely.. finishes the rain part.. clean as a whistle

divinediu said...

Years??

Don't bash yourself!! :P

Think, if you still love him.

Take your time too. There's no rush. Meanwhile, get that hug and enjoy the moment! :)

Anurag said...

I had read the first part earlier...intresting culmination to the whole thing....Nice Nice end to it girl....

Akansha Agrawal said...

@chriz
Hey!I have a copyright to this...

@divinediu
It's fiction gal...

@anurag
It's not over yet!Story abhi baaki hai mere dost...

Suresh Kumar said...

And so the God inside you ... what answers did he had ?

Hmm.. I think I have to wait for the next episode for the answers.

Chronicwriter said...

i was talking abt the emotions sprayed in this.. cool it touched..

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Chriz
Thank u :)

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Suresh
Even I don't know right now...

Arjun said...

u still r left with the same questions as in part -1 .... :)
Only u'll know the answers.....

Make this story a series kind of thing... Would be interesting..!! :)

Cheers..!!
Arjun

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Arjun
Yeah it's the same questions, but they cannot really get answered till 'we' meet... and this post conveyed something important, 'we' are about to meet!

Yes I'm planning to make this a series thing...

Dewdrop said...

Nice! very fresh

Riya said...
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Riya said...

hey.. nice post... u write really well..

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Dewdrop
Thank you :)

@Riya
Thank you :)
Will be posting another one soon...

Rajesh said...

Hey...droppin here the first time...

I read the first part too...must say, I loved it...

Esp must com pliment u for the pic u have put here...LOVELY!!!! Refreshing!!!

Nice work..count me a regular here..

P.S: I've a suggestion.. U have put it like '14 HAVE YOUR SAY' in the comments section.. make it like '14 HAVE THEIR SAY'... doesn't that sound better????

Just a suggestion...Cheerzzz!!!

Akansha Agrawal said...

@Rajesh
Thanks a lot...
And yeah, I think it does sound a lot better. Actually I had tried making it Have Your Say followed by the number, but couldn't really edit the code. But your way is cool, will implement it, thanks :)

aZoed said...

The gtalk part again gives a tinge of truth to this piece of fiction(if it really is one) ;)

Akansha Agrawal said...

Well this is a work of fiction... but it could happen to anybody!